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©2006-2009 ~Colophonius
:iconcolophonius:

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I wrote a poem, and for the poem I took this photo...
I'll try to transalte the first stanza into english...(It's no good poem, actually I want to submit the photo...)

Dieing
words are falling out of my hand
breathing
I hear the sound
Silence
is the word


Well, I know the poem is rubbish...Please comment on the photo :]
And as always, comments are very appreciated!

(Ah, when anyone sees a grammar/language mistake in the poem, please say it. It would be good when at least the grammar is correct in the poem :D )

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:iconnandez-kun:
Nice kinda strange view but nice.

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Sorry, i'm not here because i'm dead.
:iconcolophonius:
Hey thanks so much :hug:

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»Things just happen. What the hell.«
:iconsortvind:
wow! I like the photo! the text is indeed nice, but very cliche;D.

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The states of awareness we currently perceive are only a thiny fraction of the whole.
The continuum extends deep into nonphysical areas of the universe far beyond our current physical comprehension

- William Buhlman
:iconcolophonius:
Ah yeah you are right, I'm no poem writer :D
But I'm glad you like the photo :D

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»Things just happen. What the hell.«
:icongwynth777:
Wauw, it's beautifull!
I really like the black-white effect with only your hair red =)
Nice job!
And the poem is wonderfull ;)
:iconfelkwafi:
Aahh!! THE HAIR!! THE HAIR!! Sooooo cool~~~!! And the poem fits it nicely as well!!
:iconviviphalloids:
:O_o: woow .. very nice one! i love the hair n her face lik shining white we can barely see it :) cool

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Create your pain, design your wound
watch the fresh blood drain
from your skin and from your vains.
This art can take you far
once it becomes a scar.
The agony you endured
and the beauty of this scar,
will make you a star...
:iconcolophonius:
Hihi thanks so much dear :hug:

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»Things just happen. What the hell.«
:iconcolophonius:
Thank you very much, your comments mean a lot to me :)

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»Things just happen. What the hell.«

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